And Thusly Chapter One Ends

Hey everyone, we hope you’ve enjoyed the story so far. We’re going to take a shortish break while we gear up for chapter two, which should also allow time for any of you procrastinators to catch up.

Anyway, while you’re waiting with bated breath, we’d appreciate any feedback you’d be kind enough to give. What elements of the story did you enjoy the most? The least? Did it move too fast or slow? Drop us a comment and let us know.

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  1. Josiah

    Well, I would call it kind of slow and not very engaging. Nothing really seems to happen. Obviously things happen, but it’s all taken so casually.

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